Armymenis12's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[If I Had A Spaceship]

WOW

Now, I love this song. Seriously. Love Jazz songs, love this song. Are those live instruments? Also, check out some of my stuff, even though it's mostly techno/ electronica, as I am still trying to figure out how to do this whole music production thingy. Any tips on syncopation with live instruments (if it is live), as me and my Dad are having trouble with sycopation using live instruments.

--Armymenis12--

Soundshifter responds:

hey thx a lot man. no only the guitars and bass are real. i programed the rest and made my own loops. all sounds are from roland

[Futurama Intro (c.s)]

A little off of the original

A little bit off on some notes, but I forgive ya.

[Shanty (Rune Scape) C.S]

More or less the same as the MIDI

I found to be the same as the midi, but with Soundfonts/ VST's Applied. IMHO, there needs to be more treble, and some more reverb. Also, it needs a beat. I also rated the Original ad Effort down because of this. However, I still enjoyed it. I quit runescape ages ago. Twas a mem >_<. lev 70 or 80 sumthing, I can't remember. If I ever get back on, I'll add you. And my RS name is Armymenis12 aswell lol.

--Armymenis12--

[My First Metal Song(c.s)]

You tried and failed, but also won

I commend you for trying, but I don't really like the instrumentation. The bass drum was too loud and too frequent, not to mention the few cymbals/hi-hat thingie's were a bit "fake" sounding. The guitar sound wasn't all that good, but here's some friendly advice:

If u don't have FL, consider getting it, it has a bunch of stuff that you can use to make all kinds of stuff. And if you're going to ge3t it, or already have it, use FL Slayer (Comes with it) to synthesize Overdrive/Distorted Guitar.

A Honest Reviewer,
Armymenis12

P.S. Check out my stuff when you have tyhe time :)

[>TK< SMB:Main Theme Remix]

YAY!

I can tell you used some FL STudio Presets, but it's cool! "What's this knob do?" lol. Well anyways, it would better if the synth was harder (in my opinion), and if the snare was harder, too. but it's awesome. Check out my SMB remix as well. Cheers!

--Armymenis12--

TorkKey responds:

Yes I did... Unfortunetaly for me way back then was the fact that I had NO idea how to use FL... lol... Poor me...

<TK>

[beat up $hit <1>]

good

keep up the good work
PS. check out my audio and tell me what u think
YOUR BUDDY: Armymenis12

^^^Lol^^^

Is that the only basic review you leave. i mean, you could go into more detail.

But as for my ACTUAL review:

It was okay, the bass was cool. Didn't get far into it, as I'm falling asleep (It's 2:01 OMG :0 ).

[!_-Party House-_!]

Nice

Reminds me of those ugly car commercials (No offence to you of course). Were it just shows cars driving in random locations. I like how it got all trance-y in the middle. Also reminds me of the Sim-City games.

[Armymenis12]

[!_-Progression-_!]

Cool

I liked it. The beginning reminds me of Invader Zim for some reason. When it gets the "meat" of the song, I liked how it was kept simple and flowing. Like the other guy said, it was sorta metal on tek.

Drop by my audio page and review as well.

[Armymenis12]

DeadEndRoad responds:

I see what you meen about the Invader Zim thing after listening to it again. I checked out your stuff.

Thanks for the review!

[-Joyful Glory-]

Great Work!

This is good, and in my opinion, it's REAL relaxing.
There needs some echo in some parts. (I use the Fruity Delay to get that). Also, I beleive you should add a part in the middle where it turns hardstyle, and maybe make the synth turn acid-ish in that part. Then come back to the softness, and end.

In my opininion, that would be a good structure for this song. But, it is already great! 10 outta 10!

Father-of-Death responds:

THNX SO MUCH MAN!!!!

great advice!

and a great review!!!

[WOMAN BEHIND THE WHEEL!]

Arghh.... Gave the wrong review...

I meant for my other review to be here...

Robot-Lock responds:

O .o